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Old 02-14-2008, 02:13 PM   #1
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Why are you stuck?

why might i ask,
why cant i get you off my mind
Your stuck...
you image...stuck
My mind is Dead set on you,
your beauty...its been implanted in my memory...forever
every time i see you...
i go crazy, knowing that i will never have the chance to be with you
Although you may not know this...
your stuck
you are stuck-stuck in my dreams, my mind...
I see you, where ever i might be, in my memories
when ever i stop to think, you are the first, first in my mind
so the question will remains...
Will you be mine?
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Old 02-14-2008, 03:06 PM   #2
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As a poet, I must say, that's not bad at all. Well done.
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